ES100/Critique of Scientific Paper Exercise

Practice

Intro

Full disclosure of people and organizations related to the research is nice, but listing every single assistant who worked on the project in the introduction seems like overkill. In addition, I feel like the thesis could be more direct; instead of saying "Herein I report...", perhaps better wording would have been "As a result [of oystercatcher dep. on shorelines], I expected their populations to be significantly adversely affected by the oil spill."